The bar chart below show the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The given bar chart compares the number of consumption and production of electricity in developed ten countries in 2014.
Overall, The China’s population had bigger demand either for production or consumption of electricity compared to other countries. Meanwhile, there was a considerable decrease in the manufacturing and using from electricity in Korea during this year.
China was the largest consumer and producer of the electricity, that is to say, it manufactured 5,398 billion kwh and wasted 5,302 billion kwh. In United States, the figure of electric production was much higher than consumption of electricity (the former figure was 4,099, the latter one was 3,866 kwh).
A significant decline was observed in both of production and consumption of electricity in Korea. Rep. So, this destination producted 485,1 billion kwh and consumed 449,5 billion kwh electricity in 2014. France and Brazil ranked seventh and eighth respectively, in production, France differs from Brazil by 3,05 but in consumption differs by 7,1 billion. The percentage of other countries including Russia Japan, India, Canada and Germany was almost similar in using and generate electricity during this period.

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The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. However, there are some issues with the flow of information and the use of cohesive devices.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few inaccuracies and some of the language is a bit awkward.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there are only minor errors. However, there are a few inaccuracies and some sentences are a bit awkward.

The essay addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear overview of the information. However, the essay could be improved by providing more specific details and by making more precise comparisons.