The line graph shows the prison population in European country between 1911 to 2001.
The line graph shows the
prison population in a
European country between
1911 and 2001
TASK 1: The line graph shows the prison population in a European country between 1911 and 2001.
Male Prison Population 1911-2001
50.000
40.000
30,000
20.000
10,000
0
1911 1921 1931 1941 1951
1961
1971
1981
1991 2001
Female Prison Population 1911-2001
4,000
3,000
2,000
1,000
0
1911 1921 1931 1941 1951 1961 1971 1981 1991 2001
The information is presented in a logical sequence, but the use of symbols and numbers in the essay is confusing.
Suggestions
- Use clear and complete sentences to describe the data.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary and does not effectively utilize lexical resources to describe trends or make comparisons.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and inconsistencies in the use of tenses and punctuation.
The essay does not effectively summarize or analyze the data presented in the graph. It fails to provide an overview of the trends or make comparisons where relevant.
Suggestions
- Analyze the data more thoroughly, making sure to cover all significant trends and changes.
- Avoid simply restating the numbers; try to interpret the data and explain its significance.