The charts below show the number of people in Europe who were affected by four types of noise pollution by day and by night in cities and rural areas in 2007.
The bar charts show how many people in Europe traffic, trains, aircraft, and industry noise affected in 2007. The data is divided into cities and rural areas, as well as day and night. Overall, traffic caused the most noise pollution, while industry caused the least. Noise levels were higher during the day than at night. Cities had more noise problems than rural areas.
In cities, traffic noise affected 68 million people during the day and 48 million at night. Train noise affected 10 million by day and 8 million at night. Aircraft noise was less, disturbing 4 million during the day and 1 million at night. Industry noise was the lowest, with 1 million people affected during the day and 0.25 million at night.
In rural areas, traffic noise was also the biggest problem, with 35 million affected during the day and 24 million at night. Train noise disturbed 8 million during the day and 6 million at night. Aircraft noise affected 2 million by day and 1 million at night. Industry noise had almost no impact.
In conclusion, traffic was the main source of noise pollution in both cities and rural areas, especially during the day. Rural areas had less noise than cities.
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