Average daily sales, by number of servings in winter and summer
The chart exhibits the information about the daily sales of four items (hot coffee, iced coffee, ice cream, soup and salad) by the number of servings daily in two different seasons. Overall, hot coffee and soup were sold the most in winter while iced coffee was the most preferred in summer. In addition, demand for salads did not change regardless of the season.
In winter, hot coffee was sold around 75 servings a day which was considerably higher than soup with 50 servings. While both ice cream and salads had the same figure with approximately 27 daily servings, iced coffee was the least favorite beverage with 2 sales a day.
In contrast, in summer there were differences in patterns. Despite being chosen the least in winter season, most popular choice in summer was iced coffee whose daily sales were 40 servings. Ice cream consumption was slightly higher compared to hot coffee with 30, totaled about 35 servings in a day. Lastly, the figure for salads and soups was the same with 25 servings a day.
The essay is generally well-organized with clear comparisons between seasons. However, some parts could benefit from more structured transitions.
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- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
- Conclude with a summary sentence.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately, though some expressions could be more varied.
The essay demonstrates good grammatical control with minor errors.
The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear overview and detailed comparisons.
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- Ensure all key features are clearly highlighted.
- Include a brief summary or conclusion.