bar chart phones
The bar chart gives information about global sales of the most popular five mobile phone brands – Samsung, Apple, Nokia, LG, and ZTE – from 2009 to 2013
Overall, global sales of Samsung, Apple, and ZTE increased significantly, with ZTE experiencing a slight growth. In contrast, the number for Nokia and LG decreased sharply throughout the period given.
In 2009, global sales of Samsung were around 240 million, compared to 30 million in Apple, 440 million in Nokia, 120 million in LG, and 50 million in ZTE. The figure for Samsung rose dramatically to 450 million by the end of the period shown, while Nokia saw an enormous reduction to 240 million, where Samsung was in 2009. Similarly, the one for Apple rose steadily to 150 million from 2009 to 2013, while LG showed a considerable fall to 70 million. Furthermore, global sales of ZTE increased moderately from 50 million in 2009 to 60 million in 2013.
In summary, sales of Samsung became dominant due to continuous growth by the end of the period, whereas Nokia and LG saw a substantial decline. These numbers for Apple and ZTE went up rapidly over the following years.
The essay presents information in a logical order, but there are some inconsistencies in summarizing the trends.
Suggestions
- Ensure consistency in summarizing data trends.
- Use linking words to enhance flow between sentences.
- Clarify the summary to accurately reflect data trends.
The vocabulary used is appropriate, but some expressions could be more precise.
Good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay addresses the task and provides an overview of the data, but some details are inaccurately summarized.
Suggestions
- Ensure all data trends are accurately represented.
- Provide a clear, concise summary of the data trends.