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being a celebrity such as a famous fiml star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits do you think that being a celebrity have more benefits or more problems?

The media depicts the life of famous people without any problems, while being a celebrity can have its own problems. This essay will discuss the benefits as well as drawbacks of being a well-known person.
There are clear advantages when it comes to being a celebrity. They can make a fortune and buy expensive cars, huge houses and whatever they want. It means since they are in the spotlight and many people especially young people tend to be like them, celebrities can even make more money by advertising different products such as beauty products, the latest gadgets and clothes. They also can travel by their private jets and can have their dedicated islands. Being a famous person has some financial benefits.
On the other hand there are more problems for well-known people like famous film stars or elite athletes, or football players. While they make an immense amount of money, they also have to spend a lot as well as on their designer label clothes and their expensive cars. In terms of their private life they have some problems. For instance, The paparazzi follow them everywhere to take photos. This means they cannot go to an ordinary restaurant to have a meal or go to the cinema or art galleries, because lots of photographers want to take pictures for their magazines or their newspapers. Another personal problem for famous people is that if they have some issues in their personal lives, everyone will notice very soon and this can exacerbate their problems. Therefore there are clear personal problems for these people.
In conclusion, while a lot of money can come with being famous, these people and their family suffer from a lack of privacy due to the presence of paparazzi. In my view there are more problems than benefits when it comes to being a celebrity.

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The essay is logically organized and the ideas are connected well. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

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The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are only minor errors. However, there is room for improvement in terms of sentence variety and complexity.

The essay addresses the task effectively and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples.

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