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Cybullying has become major concern in recent years. What problems does it create, and what measures can be taken to combat it?

Nowadays, Cyberbullying which is new form of harassment has become one of the main problem amongist people in digital era. This online harassment can give rise to some issues in terma of psychological and emotsional problem such as anxiety, sense of self-esteem, lack of confidance and social isolation and only way to deal with these problem educating people, parental supervision, community involvement, implementation new policies.
With the advent of internet, it changed the way people communication. That fact has been affecting people’s lives in a both a negative and positive side simultaneously. New terms like cyberbullying has emerged in modern world. That sort of issue have devastating impact on all people who involved in social platforms like, Facebook, telegram, instagram and ect. According to recent observations, especially, many teenagers got involved in cyberbullying experienced emotinal problems including anxiety, sense of self-worth, lack of confidance and social isolation, leading to reduce academic performance and social interaction. That can not be feasible, and given that psychological problems like social isolation which come from online abuse continues to negatively effect young generation, this pose mental changes which is major concern in society. In Uzbekiston, for example, the number of reporting to police on online harassment has significantly increased. That fact is demonstrating that cyberbullying is involving to address the problem early.
Addressing these problems requires educating people, parental supervision, , implementation new policies. Initially, educating people assist to rise the level of awareness about cyberbullying and how to prevent their children from it. Furthermore, Parental supervision community involvement help to identify issues before their children step into chain reactions of emotional changes that finally end up mental disorder. Moreover, Government should take significant steps by implementing policy and encourage scientist to do research about how to combat this kind of petty crime. For instance, developed countries like the USA and many European countries are attempting to prevent children to be threatened online by implementing strict regulations and controlling social media tools.
In conclusion, the form of online harassment can pose long-lasting mental problems among people and both parents and government should find practical solution to resolve that growing problems which can impact the social interaction of children in a negative side.

6.5

The essay is logically organized and the progression of ideas is clear. However, there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of cohesive devices.

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The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are only minor errors. However, there are some grammatical inaccuracies that affect the clarity of the writing.

The essay addresses the task effectively and provides a well-developed response to the question. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples.

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