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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative development?

Many countries around the world have always relied on fossil fuels as a primary source of energy. This trend, however, is changing by the replacement of green energy, including solar, wind, water and nuclear energy. I believe this change is desirable.
Substituting fossil fuels with alternative energy, however, can entail several drawbacks, with the cost concerns being the major one. According to several studies, the equipment and transportation, which are used to generate such energy, can require a great deal of funding. Considering the economic deficiencies of developing countries, such practice can take ages to apply on a large scale, making the process less effective. Reliability of this development should not be neglected as well. Usually, alternative energy mainly depends on sunlight and wind, which is not always available in every geographical locations. This would mean that there is a threat of not being able to supply the whole nation, when the energy is needed massively.
Despite this, I tend to view this change positively. The primary positive of applying renewable energy is the environment. Once fossil fuels are burnt, huge amount of carbon dioxide are emitted, which is the main factor to cause climate change, including rising of temperature as well as sea levels, wildfire. This results in the loss of biodiversity, profound impact on human well-being and the planet Earth. Another positive is its sustainability. Fossil fuels are finite, meaning that they cannot be reproduced and eventually run out. In contrast, alternative energy is renewable, which makes them more sustainable to generate power according to the needs of nations.
In conclusion, the usage of green energy can pose such challenges as high cost implification and doubts on reliability. However, the positives of this trend is favorable as they are environmentally friendly and sustainable.

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The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

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  • Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas.
  • Make sure that your conclusion effectively summarizes the points you have made in the essay.

The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a variety of complex structures. However, there are a few grammatical errors and awkward constructions.

The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples.

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  • Make sure that each paragraph fully develops a single point.