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The table gives information about the volume of money provided to growing countries by the USA, European union and other nations, between 2006 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the USA supplied the largest amount of money for the development of the countries throughout the entire period, while the other countries given the least money of the same period to developing countries. Notably, the money given by all countries increased by the end of the period.
We can see that the USA contributed $9.8 billion in 2006, increasing steadily to $11 million in 2007. Then this figure before a noticeable reduction to $16.7 in 2009, the amount of money rose dramatically to $17 in 2008. Thereafter it peaked at $20.3, by the close of the period. According to the sum of money allocated by the UE and others countries saw a growth of 25% from $3.1 and $2.8 in 2006 to $3.9 and $3.5, respectively. This indicator declined slightly to $3.6 and 3.2 in 2009, followed by a climb to 4.1 and 3.7, correspondingly. The total amount of money given by all countries for countries development increased from 15.8 to 20 dollars over the entire period.
The essay presents information in a logical sequence but lacks smooth transitions between ideas. Some sentences are unclear due to awkward phrasing.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear main point.
- Clarify confusing sentences.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some repetition. There are occasional errors in word choice.
The essay contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but contains inaccuracies in data representation and lacks detailed analysis.
Suggestions
- Ensure data is accurately represented from the table.
- Provide more detailed comparisons and analysis.