Housing is a basic necessity for everyone. Therefore, government should provide free housing for people who cannot afford to pay it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a view Accomadation has gained a considerable attention in this contemporary area.
As a section of society reaction that low antorities should provide free house to those who can not affort it. The advancement has been in every sector inflation is not an expection of this majority of people not able to meet then daily requirement and apart from that due to inflation they are to buying house for to live a healthy life. The goverment should provide some place to them for living sitatistic gives that ptoverty. They just depend on low bodies for their survival.
On the other hand, it will be a very difficult task for the goverment because there are so many unemployed people. Almost half of the worlds population is housless and unemployment. it is difficult to provide free housing to every homeless person, but I think it is easy for the goverment to help. For example, it is easy to provide housing to need people on a fixed term paynet and to buy housing for a long time. In conclusion, The government should provide house to all the homeless because it is the duty of the government, however it should provide free housing to those who are very needy.
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