How recycled paper is made
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in recycling paper.
Overall,we can see that recycling paper is made using four main steps beginning with making pulp followed by filtering and ending with making available paper.
In the first stage of recycling paper, the used paper is transported on a conveyor belt into pulping machine where it is mixed with water and chemicals. In the second stage,in order for to be successful process,it is transferred into the filtering step,and in this step,the used paper is filtered with removing some large particles from it.
Subsequently, third step involves cleaning,in this step,the used paper undergoes another round of treatment with water and soap where it is cleaned completely,and also air helped to the process,in order for to be completely cleaned.Afterwards,once the cleaning has completed,the pulp rolled via the conveyor belt through heated rollers where it is shaped as a final stage of recycling paper and rolls of recycled paper ready for distribution and use.
The essay presents a logical sequence of steps but lacks clear transitions and some parts are repetitive.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Avoid repetition of phrases.
- Ensure each stage is clearly distinct.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some repetition and occasional errors.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay covers the main stages of the process but lacks detailed explanation in some areas.
Suggestions
- Include more details about each step.
- Ensure all stages are equally covered.