How recycled paper is made
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the production of recycled paper.
Overall, this process is carried out in four main stages: making pulp, filtering, cleaning, making paper.
Initially, the used paper is collected in boxes. From there, they are mixed with water chemicals to remove any residue. Once made pulp, it is sent to the next stage to filter the unfiltered pulp.
The next stage occurs at the cleaning field. Here, used paper is subjected to mixture which includes water and soap. Cleaned pulp appears in this process. At this time, air is continiously delivered to seperate ink. Then it is again mixed with water and chemicals. After demolishing water and chemicals, it is shaped into heated rollers. At the making paper stage, it is dryed on conveyor belt to seperate water. In the end. we can see recycled paper to use again for our cessity.
The essay follows a logical sequence but lacks clear transitions between stages.
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The essay uses basic vocabulary with some repetition and errors.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings.
The essay describes the process but lacks detailed explanations of each stage.
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