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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them school. Do the advantage of home education outweigh the disadvantage?

In some countries, more parents are choosing to educate their children at home instead of seeming them to school. This trend has both advantages and disadvantages, which I will discuss in this essay.
One main advantage of home education is that it allows parents to focus on their child’s individual needs. In schools, teachers must manage large classes and they cannot give attention to every student. However, at home, parents can spend more time on subjects where their child struggles. For example, if a student finds mathematic difficult, parents can give extra lessons in this subject. As this can improve the child performance and confidence. I think that when the child don’t go to school, they will always have enough time and will have time to do everything.For example, they can participate in extracurricular , sports and science clubs.
Another benefit of home education is that parents can create a safe and comfortable environment. In schools, children may face bullying or peer pressure which can harm their self-esteem and metal health. At home, parents can protect the children from such negative influences.
However, there also disadvantages to homeschooling. One significant drawback is the lack of social interaction. Schools help children develop teamwork, communication and leadership skills by interacting with peers.
Another issue is the back of professional teaching expertise. Schools employ trained teachers who understand low to deliver complex subjects effectively. Parents however, may not possess the some level of level of knowledge or skills, which could limit the quality of education their child receives.
In conclusion while homeschooling offers benefits like personalised attention and a safe learning environment, it’s disadvantages such as limited social interaction and unqualified teaching, suggest that traditional schooling remains the better choice for most families.

6.5

The essay is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of cohesive devices.

Suggestions
  • Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transitions between ideas.
  • Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there is some evidence of a range of grammatical structures. However, there are several grammatical errors and some sentences are difficult to understand.

The essay addresses the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the discussion could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples.

Suggestions
  • Provide more specific examples to support your arguments.
  • Ensure that each paragraph fully develops a single idea and is well connected to the overall argument.