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In the future , people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payements may have to be made by card or using phones . Do you think this will happen one day ? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash ?

In today’s society, everything going to be more online and using technology. Maybe there are some situations and bases that make your payments fulfilment only with credit card or using online applications. Although some people prefer the old way .touching and feeling notes and coins.
Who would have imagined in the past someday we have video calls, that let us catch each other in spite of far locations As many things have changed during years, I believe it possible that everyone use online payment or bank cards even it isn’t pleasant right now or somehow it strange for them. However, like other changes, we cannot point the exact time for diappear note money.
Due to the fact it happened, even we are ready or not, omitting note money not only occur but also in further future credit cards will be useless ,too. Instead them as it is available in some countries ,more and more later years, using chipsets would pay your shopping. Even though these are easier ways without any physical investigations ,change and break habits are always difficult for humans.
The other point is about what people feel while using cash. A strange feeling like kind of power or afford to do or have something. because of that,our bodies produce more dopamine hormone known as a motivation factor.
To sum up , about the future of payment different ways and also the consumers reactions to this. Whereas flow of variation have started many years ago in other parts of our society, payment ways are not separated and, sooner or later it will happen undeniably.

5.5

The essay is somewhat difficult to follow due to a lack of clear organization and coherence in some parts. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent, and there are some issues with paragraphing. However, there is some logical progression of ideas.

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  • Use a variety of cohesive devices appropriately.
  • Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and some flexibility in use of words and phrases. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and collocation.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, but there are some errors in grammar and punctuation. Some sentences are difficult to understand due to incorrect grammar or punctuation.

The essay addresses the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples. The conclusion could be more comprehensive.

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  • Consider providing a more comprehensive conclusion that summarizes the main points of your argument.