Internet users as percentage of population
The line graph illustrates the proportion of internet using people in three countries from 1999 to 2009.
Overall, the percentage of internet users in Mexico increased steadily while that in the USA rose remarkably in decade period. In particular, Internet users as proportion of Canadians grew dramatically than the two states.
In 1999, Mexico internet users stood at the lowest rate. However, this rate didn’t remain constant and increased gradually until 2009. In the 1999s onwards, there has been a dramatic increase and a considerable rice continued between 2003 and 2009. It stood at the highest level in 2009. The USA grew moderately in Internet spending over a 4-year period ( 1999-2003). In 2005, It even equalled with Canada but then it slow minimally in internet using.
The essay provides a general overview but lacks clear structure and logical progression. There are abrupt transitions and some information is repeated or unclear.
Suggestions
- Organize the essay into clear paragraphs.
- Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
- Avoid repetition and ensure clarity in descriptions.
The lexical resource is adequate but lacks variety and precision. Some words are used incorrectly.
The essay demonstrates a limited range of grammatical structures with several errors affecting clarity.
The task is partially achieved. The essay describes the graph but lacks detailed analysis and specific data points.
Suggestions
- Include specific data points to support descriptions.
- Provide more detailed analysis of trends and comparisons.