letter
Dear Course Administration,
The reason I am addressing you is that I would like to request you to make some changes to the course schedule you are currently attending. Since I have a full-time job from 8:00 in the morning to 18:00 in the evening, I am currently late for courses that start at 18:00. This has a negative effect on my ability to fully master the lessons.
I need a language certificate for my master’s degree because it is very important for my field. I really liked the topics covered in the course and I want to continue studying. However, due to my use of public transport, I will be late for classes and the main part will be over. This prevents me from being fully involved in the learning process.
I really like the course and its program, but the timing is a bit inconvenient. Due to the busy working day, the problems mentioned above occur.
Therefore, I request you to change the course time from 18:00 to 20:00. This allows me to relax a little after work, eat and be on time for the course.
Thank you very much for your attention and understanding. I look forward to your reply.
Best regards
Sitora
The essay is logically organized and the ideas are connected, but there are some areas where the flow of ideas could be improved. The message is clear and the information is presented in a logical sequence, but the transition between some ideas is a bit abrupt. Using linking words and phrases more effectively could help to improve the overall coherence and cohesion of the essay.
Suggestions
- Try to use a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more effectively.
- Ensure that your request for the schedule change is clearly justified in the conclusion of your letter.
The essay demonstrates a good command of a varied vocabulary, with appropriate use of formal language. However, there are a few instances where word choice could be improved for greater precision and formality. Using more formal and precise language throughout the essay could help to enhance the overall lexical resource.
The essay demonstrates a good control of a range of grammatical structures, with only minor errors. However, there are a few instances where sentence structure could be improved for greater clarity and formality. Paying closer attention to grammatical accuracy and sentence structure could help to enhance the overall quality of the essay.
The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear explanation of the writer’s situation and a well-arganged proposal for a schedule change. The writer’s request is clearly justified, and the conclusion effectively summarizes the main points and reiterates the request for a schedule change. However, the essay could be improved by providing more specific details about the proposed schedule change and the benefits it would bring.
Suggestions
- Consider providing more specific details about the proposed schedule change and the benefits it would bring.
- Ensure that the request for the schedule change is clearly justified in the conclusion of your letter.