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Many animal species are becoming extinct at an alarming rate in recent years. What do you believe are the main causes of this phenomenon? What measures can be taken to address this issue?

Nowadays, scientists said that kind of many animals have rised loss of danger, thereby, they have performed outside migration that is to say this phase will increase extinction of their and do not live in earth. We have seen there is only two thing for it this essay.
The extinction of animal species is caused by a several factors. animals` habitats have been damaged since deforestation began,and they are now endangered.The most mains in their, because of humans activities are able to destroy natural habitant condition and climate change. At the right now, amazon forests was destroyed by investors for create new and modern wooden home . As a result , numerous flora and fauna`s world mixed. Moreover, oil of ships via sea to spread sea animals are dying. In 2023, one-third of marine animals have been poisoned and rendered unfit. As a result , the shores of many island nations have become filled with dead creatures.
Several effective measures need to be taken address this issue. Forests need to intersection have stopped, rehabilitation programs introduction. This solution is good aspect that for problems. The more national parks was built, the more animals species was protected here. One of my solution ,defence areas to creation in the sea and ocean. This approach is effective for solving problem.
In conclusion, the extinction of animal species has become a serious issue since whole universe, to address this issue ,people must focus on protecting nature and maintaining a clean environment.

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The essay is difficult to follow due to unclear pronoun reference and awkward sentence construction. The use of cohesive devices is inconsistent.

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  • Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences within the paragraph relate to this topic.

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary and there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling.

The essay contains a number of grammatical errors and there is a lack of complex sentence structures.

The essay addresses the task and provides a relevant response. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported.

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