map
The map illustrates the significant changes of the village of Ruemouth since 1995.
Overall, several minor changes have occurred, such as the conversion of shops, fish markets, and the forest park, along with new facilities being built.
In 1995, a forest park with trees was located on the east side of the village, a fishing port was at the bottom, and several houses were in the northeast corner and center-left. It is clear that many shops and fish market situated from both side of the road with café and hotel nearby.
Residential areas have expanded, replacing the former farmland and forest park with sports centers for golf and tennis. Shops have been replaced by a number of restaurants. Similarly, Fish markets have gone and now its place belongs to apartments. A second café was constructed to the right of the hotel, with no access to the fishing port.
Despite these changes, the village retains its basic housing elements, with additional features like a new café, restaurants, and apartments.
The essay provides a clear overview of the changes but lacks logical progression and clear paragraphing.
Suggestions
- Use clear paragraphing to separate different types of changes.
- Ensure logical progression of ideas.
- Use linking words more effectively.
The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but some phrases are repetitive or unclear.
The essay contains some grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task and describes the changes, but lacks detailed information on some aspects.
Suggestions
- Include more specific details about the changes.
- Ensure all changes are covered comprehensively.