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Not all drivers obey the law while driving on the roads. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to fix this problem?

It is a fact that the rules of the road are not followed by a few drivers while driving. While this can be attributed to recklessness, human error, and lack of education, the solutions lie in enhancing law enforcement and increasing the minimum age to obtain a driver’s license.
One of the main reasons for breaking traffic laws is human error and recklessness. In other words, some drivers exceed speed limits while driving. As a result, they often run red lights, creating obstacles for pedestrians trying to cross the road. Additionally, some drivers use their mobile phones while driving, which significantly increases the risk of accidents. Another contributing factor is the lack of education. If people get a driver’s license at a young age, they might not know how to drive according to the rules. New or inexperienced drivers are more likely to make mistakes.
However, there are some viable ways to tackle this problem. One effective measure is enhancing law enforcement. If cameras are installed to monitor and penalize violations, the number of traffic offenses could decrease, and potential violations could be prevented. Increasing fines can help prevent accidents and reduce traffic violations. Increasing the minimum age to obtain a driver’s license is another solution. Currently, many young people obtain licenses without adequate experience. Due to their lack of experience, they often violate traffic rules. If the minimum age is increased, the incidence of such accidents will likely decrease.
In conclusion, various factors contribute to disobeying traffic rules; however, once necessary steps are taken, the problem can be addressed effectively.

7.5

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there could be better use of linking words to connect ideas and sentences more effectively.

Suggestions
  • Use a wider range of linking words to connect ideas and sentences more effectively.
  • Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that all sentences in the paragraph relate to this topic.

The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are a few minor errors, but these do not impede communication.

The essay addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. The essay could be improved by providing more specific examples to support the arguments.

Suggestions
  • Provide more specific examples to support your arguments. In the second body paragraph, you could provide an example of a specific study or statistic related to the lack of education and experience among young drivers. In the third body paragraph, you could provide an example of a specific country or region that has successfully implemented a minimum age requirement for driver’s licenses.