Rubbish
I know all people always dependencies with rubbish activity to shop. every supermarket also to provide rubbish for the people come to buy all items. all people always question to the cashier want to give rubbish. also in traditional market the people dependencies with rubbish. we know the rubbish to be polution all the world. Actually the government can make regulation comprehensif to all people. Maybe goverment can reduce the polution with implementations reduce the rubbish stricgth to all supermarket can’t use rubbish. the alternative managemen supermarket can inform to customers the supermarket not provide the rubbish so all people can provide.
Also traditional market to inform not provide rubbish, I think with the regulation and good governance all people can compliance with decision the goverment.
But the goverment must do it monitoring to all market if any not compliance with the regulation give the punishment with take control the supermarket
The essay is somewhat logically organized, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. There is a basic use of cohesive devices, but they are sometimes inaccurate or repetitive. The essay also lacks a clear paragraphing structure, which can make it difficult for the reader to follow the argument.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices correctly to improve the flow of your writing.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear purpose and that all points within it are closely related to the main argument.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary and there are several inaccuracies in word choice and spelling. Some words are repeated and there are issues with word formation and spelling that can make the text difficult to understand.
The essay uses a very limited range of grammatical structures. There are some accurate sentences, but errors predominate and reduce the clarity of the writer’s meaning. Punctuation is often inadequate, which affects the readability of the essay.
The essay addresses the task only in a minimal way and the format may be inappropriate. The essay presents a position, but it is unclear and not well supported. There are some main ideas, but they are difficult to identify and are not well developed. The essay also does not effectively use examples to support the main points.
Suggestions
- Make your position more clear throughout the essay.
- Develop your main ideas more fully to provide a more convincing argument.
- Use specific examples to support your main points.