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Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There is a view that a new language should be invented for communication on a global scale. While this idea may seem beneficial in terms of making it easier for people to interact, I believe English and a few other languages already became too integrated into our lives, especially in the fields of business and technology. Thus, there is no need for a new language.
A new global language could be helpful if it combined various elements of different languages into one, making it easier to learn and use. However, many attempts to create such a language did not result in productive outcomes. Even Esperanto, the world’s most popular constructed language is only spoken by around 100,000 people despite being available for more than a hundred years. This example suggests that creating a new language that is favored by millions could be a more difficult task than one can imagine.
Having English and a few other languages such as French and Spanish has been beneficial for many years. They are already spoken by billions of people, and English, most importantly, is easier to learn when compared to many languages. This same language is also prevalent in the world of business and technology, with most negotiations using English and devices having it as a default setting. I am convinced we should maintain our use of English and promote it even further to the point where the vast majority of the world speaks it. This can result in further economic advantages by improving business communication between different countries, while also helping people become bilingual or multilingual.
In conclusion, there is no need for a new language when English and some other globally popular languages are already being effectively used. Promoting a new language is basically a waste of time and resources.

8.0

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

Suggestions
  • Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas.
  • Ensure that your arguments are fully developed in each paragraph.

The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are few grammatical errors, but they do not impede communication.

The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout. The arguments are well-developed and supported with relevant examples. However, the essay could be improved by providing a more detailed exploration of the opposing view.

Suggestions
  • Consider including a brief discussion of the potential advantages of creating a new language to provide a more balanced argument.