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Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved

Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from prison. What do you think is the cause?
How can it be solved?
Some ex-inmate enact delinquency after being liberate from detention center.The problem is bringing a state of depression among the masses and in economy too. There are plethora of reasons of the same and its possible solutions can be suggested too which are discussed as follows.
There are two mains reasons why the ex-prisoners have a tendency to return to commit crimer after having liberty. The first reasons associated with this phenomenon is that the lack of education and the poverty that the offenders will be foced in the future.As an illustration some criminal has been loced up in jail in along time so they cannot adopt to keep pace with the changes of social, causing unemployment and shortage of money to cover life.
Seeing the problem with a brighter mind money of solutions can be helpful to curb this manace.First , government should responsible for educating job-related skills and law system to the criminals. Having same knowledge of the job offenders will be better prepared to find a suitable work which enable them to earn a living after being released. Furthermore people should create an opportunities for prisoners who leave priton to integrate with humanity life.
To conclude, solving a global issue is not easy but with the joint efforts of the people a control can be taken over the problem with the aforementioned suggested measures . I believe that everyone should come forward to mitigate this problem.

5.5

The essay is logically organized and the progression of ideas is clear. However, there are some issues with the use of cohesive devices and the overall cohesion of the essay. The essay follows a logical structure, but the use of cohesive devices is sometimes inaccurate or missing, making the progression of ideas a bit difficult to follow. Additionally, the conclusion could be more effective in summarizing the main points and providing a clear final thought.

Suggestions
  • Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transition between ideas.
  • Make sure to fully develop your conclusion to effectively summarize the main points and provide a clear final thought.

The essay uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and collocation. The essay demonstrates a good command of a range of vocabulary related to the topic, with some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choices that could be revised for clarity and accuracy.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are some errors in grammar, punctuation and spelling. However, these do not impede communication. The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures and there are some errors in grammar, punctuation and spelling. These errors do not impede communication, but they can be distracting. Proofreading is recommended to ensure that these errors are identified and corrected.

The essay addresses the task and provides a relevant response. However, the response could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples. The essay addresses the prompt by discussing the reasons why some ex-prisoners may reoffend after being released from prison and suggesting potential solutions. However, the response could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples. The essay would benefit from a more detailed exploration of the factors contributing to recidivism and how these factors can be addressed effectively.

Suggestions
  • Ensure that each point is fully developed and supported with specific examples.