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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equally. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are best at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether teenagers should focus on all school subjects or only the ones they are best at or find most interesting. While some argue that focusing on all subjects equally can be useful for teenagers, I side with those who believe teenagers should learn the subjects they excel in and find most engaging.
On the one hand, there are several positive aspects to studying all subjects. First and foremost, each subject provides specific knowledge and skills. For example, while mathematics develops logical thinking and problem-solving abilities, literature enhances communication and creative thinking. Additionally, subjects such as history and biology encourage teenagers to understand the world and develop critical thinking. Second, a comprehensive education provides a broad base of knowledge to solve various problems in life. Therefore, studying all subjects prepares students for future professions and diverse situations.
On the other hand, despite such arguments, I believe it is necessary for teenagers to study the subjects they consider most important and interesting. First of all, teenagers are eager to study the subjects they like and strive to improve themselves. In other words, these subjects are essential for teenagers’ future success and careers, helping them develop their plans in their chosen fields.
In conclusion, although studying all subjects is useful for gaining comprehensive knowledge, I believe it is more effective to focus on subjects that align with teenagers’ interests. This will not only help them gain in-depth knowledge in their fields but also boost their self-confidence.

7.0

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

Suggestions
  • Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas more effectively.
  • Ensure that your ideas flow smoothly from one to the next.

The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are few grammatical errors, but they do not impede communication.

The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout. Both sides of the argument are discussed in a balanced way, and the writer’s opinion is clearly stated and supported. However, the conclusion could be stronger. It restates the thesis and summarizes the main points, but it does not clearly state the writer’s final position.

Suggestions
  • Make sure your conclusion is stronger and more definitive.
  • Consider restating your thesis and clearly summarizing the main points of your essay.