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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, development of technology is significantly increasing. While, some people argue that improvements in technology can provide more options for criminals, others believe that enhancing innovations does more damage rahter than reduces. In my opinion, there are some advantages of innovations, however this cause help to create better ways for crime.
On one hand, many people think that, effects of technology development will help to reduce the worldwide crime rates. In these days, some developing countries are manufacturing high video quality cameras, control services used in heavily guarded areas specifically aeroports and railway stations. For instance, in Chine which one of the significantly developing cameras especially in technology development. They are using tools to trace cybercrimes, such as hacking and phishing, help law enforcement catch perpetrators. Also these can identify patterns of criminal behavior, enabling proactive crime prevention.
On the other hand, while the use of technology in crime prevention and detection has numerous advantages, it also comes with several drawbacks. These challenges need to be addressed to ensure the effective and ethical use of technology in combating crime. Storing sensitive data, such as biometric information, can lead to misuse or unauthorized access. Developing countires may lack the resources to deplay these technologies effectively.
In concluson, while technology has revolutionized crime prevention and investigation, its drawbacks cannot be overlooked.By carefully managing these challenges, society can harness the benefits of technology while minimizing its potential risks. I disagree with the idea that the development of technology will necessarily decrease crime.

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The essay is logically organized and the progression of ideas is clear. However, there are some issues with the flow of ideas and the use of linking words.

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The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary and there is some evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are only minor errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect sentence construction.

The essay addresses the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples.

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