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Some people think that the main benefit of international cooperation is in the protection of the environment, while others believe that businesses mainly benefit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many today argue that international collaboration mainly serves to benefit businesses while others feel there are greater advantages overall for the environment. I would side with the former viewpoint due to the concrete and tangible outcomes.
Proponents of the environmental benefits of international cooperation emphasize the global challenges now being met by collective action. Climate change, for instance, is a quintessential example of an issue transcending national borders. The 2015 Paris Agreement, which saw nearly 200 countries commit to limiting global temperature rise, illustrates how international cooperation tackles environmental crises. This agreement, borne out of multilateral negotiations, demonstrates how countries now work together to implement emission reduction targets, promote sustainable development, and support climate resilience efforts in vulnerable regions. These efforts along with various wildlife protection treaties, underscore the reality of cross-border efforts to conserve natural habitats and endangered species.
Conversely, the global economy is intricately linked through trade agreements, investment treaties, and multinational corporations. Free trade agreements, such as the North American Free Trade Agreement (NAFTA) and the European Union’s Single Market, demonstrate how countries collaborate to facilitate trade, reduce tariffs, and stimulate economic growth. These agreements benefit businesses by opening new markets, enhancing supply chain efficiencies, and fostering innovation. As a result, international business partnerships can drive technological and economic development. For instance, collaborations between tech giants and global firms enable the sharing of resources, knowledge, and technology, accelerating progress in various sectors, from information technology to renewable energy. Such partnerships illustrate how business interests have been a significant driver of international cooperation, with economic gains often translating into tangible improved living standards.
In conclusion, while international cooperation undoubtedly benefits both the environment and the business world, the latter, unfortunately, enjoys the greatest general advantages. Nonetheless, balancing economic interests with environmental stewardship is crucial for fostering a sustainable and equitable future.

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The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

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  • Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas.
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The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. There are a few minor errors, but they do not impede communication.

The essay addresses the task fully and presents a well-developed response with relevant, extended and supported ideas. However, the argument could be more fully developed in places.

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  • Ensure that you fully develop your arguments and provide sufficient support for your points.
  • Consider addressing potential counterarguments to provide a more balanced discussion.