Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph provides information about car sales in a particular country from 1960 to 2010.
Overall, the number of cars sold throughout this period declined from the beginning to the end of the period provided.
Turning in to the details, about 105 cars were sold in 1960,and numbers started to go down from that point. Starting with 105, car sales dropped by 20 in every decade from 1960. After fifty years from the start only 5 cars were sold.
5.0
The essay has a basic structure but lacks clear organization and transitions.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Add an introduction and conclusion.
- Clarify comparisons and trends.
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive.
The essay contains some grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and comparisons.
Suggestions
- Include more detailed comparisons.
- Add specific data points for clarity.
- Discuss possible reasons for trends.