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The table illustrate the result of survey that asked from frist-year students who take course in particular university in three different years : 2000,2005 and 2010.
Overall, percent of student satisfy to building and study facility neither rose and fell in all years in question. students satisfaction level with print ,electrical tools and teaching quality increase over the decade.while figure for range of models offer were decline slightly over the years.
Turning to details, satisfaction with buildings like stadium, gym , court and also teching facilities remained stabile throughout the period in question, which were 77 %. There are notably improvement in students satisfaction with print equipments over the years , with 84% and this figure in 2005 significantly grow and reached peack at 89%.Over the 5 years it were slightly decline to 88%. When come to the electronic equipments ,in 2000 only 45 % of frist year students satisfied with them.Over the years technology were develop and university also enhance their electronic resource ,end of period figure for electronic tools were rise almost doubled.In university`s teaching quality also saw increase over the one decade which were 65 % in 200.one decade leatter it reached 69.In 2005 figure for teaching quality were 63%.
In contrast ,student satisfaction with range of models offer declined little over the decade,with droped 5 persentage points between 2000 and 2010.

4.5

The essay provides a basic overview of the data but lacks clear organization and logical flow. Transitions between ideas are weak, and some sentences are difficult to follow.

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The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some inaccuracies. There are attempts to use more complex words, but they are often used incorrectly.

The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, including issues with verb forms, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure.

The essay attempts to describe the table but lacks detail and clarity in some areas. Some inaccuracies are present.

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