Task 1
The line graph illustrates the amount of waste produced by three companies (A, B, and C) over a 15-year period from 2000 to 2015. Overall, the waste produced by companies A and B decreased significantly, while company C experienced a steadily increase during this period.
In 2000, company A produced the higher amount of waste at 12 tonnes, but this figure gradually decline over the years, reaching 10 tonnes in 2005 and further dropping to 8 tonnes by 2015. Similarly, company B began with 8 tonnes of waste in 2000, peaking at 10 tonnes in 2005. However, after that, its waste production decreased significantly to only 3 tonnes in 2015, making it the lowest among the three companies
In contrast, company C started with the least amount of waste at 4 tonnes in 2000. Over the years, its waste production steadily increased, reaching 6 tonnes in 2005 and 10 tonnes by 2015, overtaking both company A and company B to become the largest contribution to waste production.
The essay is generally well-organized with a clear overview and logical sequence. However, there is a minor issue with the transition between the description of company A and company B, which could be smoother.
Suggestions
- Use more varied linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure transitions between paragraphs are seamless.
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, but there are some repetitive phrases. There is a good range of vocabulary related to trends and quantities.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues are present.
The essay effectively describes the main trends and comparisons shown in the graph. It provides a clear overview and detailed information about each company.
Suggestions
- Ensure all data points from the graph are accurately described.