Task 1: Letter Writing You recently attended a workshop on time management skills organized by your local community center. You found the workshop very helpful and would like to express your gratitude to the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter: • Thank them for the workshop • Mention what you found particularly helpful • Suggest any improvements for future workshops You should write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam.
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express sincere greatfulness for the time management workshop you organized at the community center. It was in incredibly improving experience community center. Thank you for inviting me to this workshop. I support your opinion because even if your watch is made of gold. It cannot stop the passing time. I especially liked that young children were involved in various circles to spend their time productively. If you don’t mind I will offer an online program for a future workshop. Which helps to save productivity and time. Let’s make good use of time.
Thank you for considering my concerns. I look forward to your response.
Best regards.
Marjona Ergasheva.
The letter has a basic structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. However, the body of the letter does not effectively address the prompts, and the flow of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited and could be improved to enhance the overall coherence of the letter.
Suggestions
- Use linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more clearly.
- Ensure that each paragraph has a clear purpose and focus.
The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words and phrases are used inappropriately or inaccurately, which affects clarity. There are also some issues with word form and spelling that can be distracting.
The letter attempts to use a variety of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that hinder understanding. Issues include incorrect verb forms, missing articles, and punctuation errors.
The letter partially addresses the workshop’s usefulness and the suggestion for future improvement. However, the metaphors and examples used are somewhat confusing and could be more clearly connected to the workshop’s content. The letter does not fully explore the impact of the workshop or the potential for future improvement in a meaningful way.
Suggestions
- Provide specific examples of what you found helpful in the workshop.
- Clearly connect your suggestions for future improvements to the workshop’s content.