Task 1: Letter Writing You recently attended a workshop on time management skills organized by your local community center. You found the workshop very helpful and would like to express your gratitude to the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter: • Thank them for the workshop • Mention what you found particularly helpful • Suggest any improvements for future workshops You should write at least 150 words

Dear sir or madam
l am writing to express my gratitude for time management skills workshop l recently attended at the communoty centre.l found the entire workshop to be very better.and provide me with some oppurtunity and enhacing my skills.
However,l have waited in different years after l attended community centre.and this centre help me understand and make the complex ideas.You were my best friend and l always remember with fondness the good days and we spend our time together for work.and community centre can help share expreinces and strategies with other workers.
While the workshop was excellent.l have suggested for enhance future programs.for example using technology to improve time management such as appswould be grateful.next providing many tools with techniques during the workshop.
Today l was significantly happy to attend in your community centre and l have noticed development in my time management skills.l am hopeful that your programs for future.l request you helo me sharing some information.
Your sincerely
Zarnigor

4.5

The letter has a basic structure with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. However, the organization of ideas is somewhat confusing, and there is a lack of logical progression in some parts. The use of cohesive devices is limited, affecting the overall flow of the letter.

Suggestions

Use paragraphs to separate different ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information.
Employ a variety of cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs more effectively.

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrases. The choice of words is sometimes repetitive or inappropriate, and there are spelling errors.

The letter demonstrates a limited range of grammatical structures. There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies in sentence construction, which can hinder understanding. Punctuation and sentence structure need improvement for better clarity and accuracy.

The letter partially addresses the task by expressing gratitude, mentioning what was found helpful, and suggesting improvements. However, the request for sharing information was not clearly defined. The letter lacks specific details and examples to support the points made. The conclusion could be more effective in summarizing the main points and reiterating the request for help.