Task 2

Some people think that living in the city is good, but some people think that living in the countryside is better. There are many positive and negative sides to both areas. Personally, I agree with both ideas and will give some examples from my own experience.
On the one hand, people prefer to live in the countryside because life in the village is clean and simple.
Firstly, living in the countryside is a better option, it can indicate a lower risk of air pollution, which is better for people’s health than living in urban areas. In addition, the cost of living in the countryside is much lower than in big cities. So, living in the countryside has more health and economic benefits.
On the one hand, there are many reasons why people think that living in urban areas is better. Firstly, city life is very simple. It provides all kinds of amenities. There are medical services, cinemas, theaters and fast communication services, absolutely all possibilities are there. In addition, the sanitary conditions in big cities are very good. The roads are also wide. However, there are several disadvantages of city life. People are arrogant and proud. They never help each other. Individuals living in the city have more access to high-paying job opportunities.
In conclusion, I think that living in the city gives good financial prospects, but living in the countryside has more advantages. Each place has its own value.

6.5

The essay is logically organized and the progression of ideas is clear. However, there are some issues with the use of cohesive devices and the overall cohesion of the essay. The essay follows a logical structure, but the use of cohesive devices is sometimes inaccurate or missing, making the connection between ideas less smooth. Additionally, the conclusion could be more effective in summarizing the main points and clearly stating the overall position.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transition between ideas.
Make sure to fully develop your conclusion to effectively summarize the main points and clearly state your overall position.

The essay demonstrates a good command of a broad lexical resource. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice. The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice that could be revised for clarity and accuracy.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are only minor errors. The essay uses a variety of complex and simple sentence structures, and the majority of sentences are free of grammatical errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms that could be revised for clarity and accuracy.

The essay addresses the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the argument could be more fully developed and supported with specific examples. The essay addresses the prompt by discussing the advantages and disadvantages of both urban and rural living. However, the argument could be more fully developed, and the examples provided could be more specific and relevant to the writer’s personal experience.