The bar chart below shows the passenger kilometres traveled by different means of transport in the UK in 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph demonstrates information about the total distance covered by passengers among five different transport types – Bicycle, Motorbike, Air, Bus and Rail – in UK in the years 1990 and 2000.
Overall, the entire kilometers travelled by passengers had the largest numbers in both years compared to other transport types. Almost all transports showed higher numbers over the period, except for Bicycle and Motorbike, where the reverse was true. Additionally, the distance travelled by Bus and Rail was higher than others.
Focusing on the largest numbers, the Total amounts of transports accounted for the highest numbers of shares by travelling, roughly 108 billion and 115 billion kilometers respectively in UK. There was, however, a more noticeable increase in the next three various transports: Air, Bus and Rail. The transports related to Air showed the lowest number of travelling, albeit it increased from about 5 billion to 7 billion kilometers during the period. Nevertheless, Bus and Rail depicted nearly the same rates with 7 billion kilometer discrepancy, with 38 billion and 45 billion kilometers in turn.
In contrast, Bicycle and Motorbike displayed a unique trend where the total share of travelling declined from 6 billion, 8 billion to nearly the same rate with 5 billion kilometers throughout the period.
The essay presents information in a generally clear and logical manner. However, some points lack clarity and connections between ideas could be improved.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
- Clarify the comparison between different transport types.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately. However, there are some repetitive phrases and minor errors.
The essay demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures with some grammatical errors.
The essay addresses the task by summarizing the main features and making some comparisons, but could be more precise in its analysis.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data to support comparisons.
- Ensure all key features are clearly summarized.