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The bar chart gives information about the common activities children of different ages in the United States do as part of their bedtime routines.

The bar chart shows the common bedtime activities of children in three different age groups: 1-3 years, 4-5 years, and 6-8 years in the United States. The activities include reading, brushing teeth, having a bath, watching TV, and eatng.
For children aged 1-3 years, the most common activity is having a bath, with 60% participating in this routine. Reading comes next at 50%, while brushing teeth is done by just under 40% of children. Watching TV is less popular, with only about 20% involved, and eating is the least common activity, with fewer than 10% taking part.
Among children aged 4-5 years, reading becomes the most common bedtime activity, with about 70% participating. Brushing teeth follows at 60%, showing an increase compared to younger children. Having a bath is done by half of the children in this group, while watching TV and eating are less frequent, with about 20% and 10% respectvely.
For children aged 6-8 years, reading remains the most popular activity, with nearly 80% involved. Brushing teeth is done by about 70% of children, making it the second most common. Having a bath is significantly lower at about 40%, while watching TV remains steady at around 20%. Eating is still the least common activity, with only about 5% participating.

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