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The bar chart gives information about the common activities children of different ages in the United States do as part of their bedtime routines

The chart compare the main trained activities which are done by children like their daily bedtime exercises among the different ages in the US, such as reading, having a bath and eating.
Overall, the proportion of children in the United States who are busy with some kind of activities including three age groups and then it shows that three of given activities are much more higher than the last two activities such as watching TV and eating in all ages.
Focusing on three higher activities first, more than 55 % of them spend their time in reading and gives the best quantity with 70% in their about 4-5 years, brushing teeth is also increases noticeably age by age between 30 % and 50%, respectively. If we look at having a bath, there was a slight decrease to 31 % than the others. Nevertheless, it Is in line of upper exercises in each age group.
Contrast to the percentage of children watching television is approximately twice as low as that for those eating than the remaining parts of their routines. Among 4 and 5-year olds , viewers of TV is considered 20 ,while consuming food dropped to 10 % . Then ,the child between 1 and 3 eats double that of food consumed by older ages at 10 percentage .

4.5

The essay presents information in a generally clear manner, but there are issues with logical progression and paragraphing.

Suggestions
  • Use clearer paragraphing to separate main ideas.
  • Ensure logical progression of ideas.
  • Clarify comparisons and contrasts.

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some misuse of words.

The essay contains frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

The essay addresses the task but lacks clarity and detail in some descriptions.

Suggestions
  • Provide clearer comparisons between activities.
  • Include more specific data from the chart.
  • Ensure all age groups are clearly addressed.