The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The chart presents how much wind energy was produced in four various countries- India, Denmark, Germany, and the US. The units are given in megawatts.
Overall, the figure for all countries witnessed an upward trend, albeit at varying rates, with the US exhibiting considerably higher numbers almost throughout the period. In addition, the amount of energy generated in India and Germany followed somewhat similar changes.
Focusing on the changes occurred between 1985 and 1990. The wind power obtained amounted to around 400 for both India and Denmark in 1990, up from 200 in 1985. A similar increase was seen in Germany, although with bigger numbers, going up from 400 to approximately 600 respectively. The USA, on the other hand, was the country which could be distinctively distinguished from others, due to it standing out with considerably higher numbers. The energy driven from wind in this country made up for about 1300 in the first year, before reaching its peak of a staggering 1600 in 1990.
By contrast, in the next ten years, increases became more noticeable, except for the US, a country which started to experience a reversed trend. In 1995, the output for the Germany slightly improved to about 700 and that for the Denmark soared to 1200, with India catching up with the former. However, then the rate of an increase for Denmark remained unchanged till the final year, repeating the peak point of the US, at 1600. Regarding the wind power generation in India and Germany, the former took up a more rapid pace and managed to produce nearly 1300 and the latter, maintaining a consistent and steady rate, increased to 900. Finally, as for amount of energy in the US, it bucked the trend, slightly declining close to 1500 first and then to exactly 1500.
The essay presents a clear overview and logically sequences the information. However, some transitions between ideas could be smoother.
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- Use more varied linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
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The essay uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, but some expressions are repetitive or imprecise.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors that do not impede understanding.
The essay effectively summarizes the main trends and provides specific data from the chart. However, some details could be more precise.
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- Ensure all data points mentioned are accurate.
- Provide more specific comparisons where relevant.