The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

The bar graph highlights how much energy was generated in four various countries- India,Denmark,Germany and US between 1985 and 2000.
Overall, While US experienced a slight fluctuation during generation of energy , there was a substantial growth in remaining three countries.
To start,US was by far the most popular regarding the production of energy ,comprising approximately 1300 megawatt in the initial year. By the year 1990, United States generated the most anount of energy by reaching its peak at 1600 megawatt . After dipping slightly down to 1600 megawatt in 1995, the amount of energy generated in the US decreased gradually to 1500 megawatt in the final year. In contrast, Denmark generated around 250 megawatt of energy in 1985, and the figure for Denmark kept rising considerably until surpassing that of the US in the final year.
As for Germany, it made up nearly 400 megawatt of energy in 1995,while the amount of energy generated in India accounted for just below 250 megawatt closely followed by Denmark. The amount of energy produced in Germany saw a gradual increase involving 900 megawatt in 2000.By comparison, India increased generating the quantity of energy till reaching 1300 megawatt in the final year.

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