The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some argue that spontaneous holidays give people an unforgettable and enjoyable experience, because we humans are likely to have surprising events, which evoke stronger emotions, making this type of holiday special in memories. While I accept that these journeys sometimes have beneficial consequences, I believe that well-thought-out holidays can noticeably improve the enjoyment and help travelers make the most of their times.
To begin with, planning a holiday in advance gives many opportunities, such as a wide range of entertainment options, managing time, avoiding extra expenses and above all a sense of safety, since an accurate plan serves as a key tool to prevent unnecessary stress and expand the actual enjoyment of the trip, compared to an unprepared one. For instance, if we take a major journey, such as going abroad, it will be reasonable to have a pre-reviewed list of places to visit, along with booked flights and accommodation that logically fit within the initial budget. This provides tourists with the ability to make adjustments, if needed, without accidentally overlooking the important details.
On the one hand, it is true that unplanned moments, such as discovering locations with recently made friends (as the locations themselves) can make a trip more exciting, often creating the most memorable impressions. However, even these moments can happen with a loose plan that allows flexibility and natural drift of life, without leaving the feel of fabricated scenario.
In conclusion, although unplanned holidays may seem more thrilling and engaging, such feelings also can still occur during a well-planned vacation, leading to an even better adventure than the former.
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.
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- Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas.
- Ensure that your ideas are fully developed and explained.
The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.
The essay demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures and is generally accurate. However, there are a few minor errors that could be improved.
The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout the response. The arguments are well-developed and supported with relevant examples. However, the introduction could be improved to better introduce the topic and provide a clear thesis statement.
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