The chart below gives information about car ownership in the UK from 1975 to 2005
The line graph provides data on vehicle ownership trends in the UK, over a 30-year period, from 1975 to 2005, showing the percentage of households with varying number of cars. Overall, while the percentage of household with one or two cars rose steadily over the years, the reverse is true for the household with no car or three cars. Additionally, it was the ownership of 1 car that maintained its position as the leading category throughout the period .
Focusing on the increases first, the ownership of 1 car initially was 45 percent, but it declined noticeably to 35% in 1985 before seeing a pronounced increase to its peak of just over 45% in the end of the period, respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage of the households with 2 cars was a mere 7%in 1875, the figure that then rose drastically to 15% in 19, which was followed by further increase to almost 20% in 2005.
In contrast, the percentage of holders with no car or three cars exhibited the different change, albeit at different pace. Starting with individuals with no cars, the proportion of people dropped dramatically from around 45% in 1975 to 25% in 1985, after which further decreased despite at slower pace to just over 20 in 2005, whereas the figure for 3 car owners dropped gradually, reaching its bottom of a mere 2% in 2005 from just over 5 % in 1975
“Correct language usage and content.”
The essay follows a logical structure but has some issues with clarity and flow.
Suggestions
- Use clearer transitions between ideas.
- Ensure consistent use of time references.
- Avoid abrupt shifts in focus.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies.
There are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies throughout the essay.
The essay addresses the task but lacks some detail and accuracy.
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- Ensure all data is accurately represented from the chart.
- Provide more detailed comparisons and analysis of trends.