The chart below shows recycled paper is made
The picture shows the process of recycling paper.
Overall, the process comprises four main stages (making pulp, filtering, cleaning, and making paper). Starting from making pulp from used paper, through filtering and cleaning to completely recycled paper. The process is a complex one, which requires much time and special equipment to complete.
The process begins with the used paper being conveyed on a belt into a large dish that has water and chemicals in it, and this helps to clean the paper. Then, it is filtered to eliminate germs. After, the filtered pulp is placed in a container with water, soap, and air to expel inks. During this stage, an air pump is installed, creating bubbles so that the ink rises to the surface, from where the ink is then removed through another pipe. This step is essential to ensure the pulp is free from any residual printing substances.
The process then moves to the final stage, during which clean pulp is passed through heated rollers for water loss. After this step, the paper is ready for use.
The essay is logically structured with a clear progression through the stages of the process. However, some transitions between stages could be smoother to enhance coherence.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve the flow between stages.
- Clarify the sequence of steps in the process.
- Ensure each stage is clearly connected to the next.
The vocabulary used is appropriate for describing the process, though it could be more varied.
The essay demonstrates a good command of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively covers the main stages of the paper recycling process, providing a clear overview.