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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

The line graph illustrates the number of reported incidents in burglary, car theft, and robbery in New Port city center from 2003 to 2012.
Overall, burglary experienced the most significant decrease over the period, while car theft overtook burglary as the most prevalent crime in around 2006. In contrast, robbery consistently accounted for the fewest incidents and showed minimal variation.
In 2003, the number of burglaries stood at just under 3,500 incidents, making it the most common crime at the time. This figure rose moderately to about 3,600, marking the peak for this category. However, by 2008, burglaries had decreased sharply to approximately 1,200 incidents, a reduction of around 2,400 cases. From 2008 onwards, the number remained relatively stable, hovering around 1,200 incidents until the end of the period.
Car theft, on the other hand, began at nearly 2,800 incidents in 2003 and showed little change over the next three years. By 2006, it had surpassed burglary, reaching around 2,200 incidents. Although the number of car thefts increased steadily until 2010, peaking at just over 2,500, it declined slightly by 2012 to finish below 2,500 incidents.
Robbery consistently recorded the lowest number of incidents throughout the period. In 2003, there were about 700 cases, and this figure declined marginally to around 600 by 2012. Unlike burglary and car theft, robbery showed no dramatic fluctuations over the nine years.

8.0

The essay is well-organized with clear paragraphing and logical progression. Each crime type is discussed in a separate paragraph, contributing to clarity.

Suggestions
  • Consider adding a concluding sentence to summarize the findings.
  • Ensure all transitions between points are smooth.

The essay uses a good range of vocabulary appropriately. There is some variation in word choice, and terminology is used correctly.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors. Sentence structures are varied and mostly accurate.

The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear overview and detailed information about each crime type. The key trends and comparisons are accurately described.