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The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

The line chart compares changes in the population of four fish species – Atlantic Cod, Haddock, Yellowfin Tuna, and Swordfish – from 1982 to 2007.
Overall, the population size of Atlantic cod and Yellowfin Tuna was significantly higher than the other two species; however, their numbers declined more steadily. It is also clear that the number of Swordfish was disproportionally lower than the others. As a result, the disparity in the population size was narrower toward the end of the period than the initial difference.
In 1982, there were more than 2 million Atlantic cod fish compared to 1.5 million Yellowfin tuna, 75,000 Haddock, and a few thousand Swordfish.
After a decade of a steady decline to 1,500,000, the Atlantic cod population recovered to about 1,750,000 fish, only to shrink to around 1,250,000 in 2007. In contrast, the Yellowfin tuna population peaked at 2,000,000 in 1992 and then declined, reaching its trough at a million in 2007.
The populations of the other two fish species – Haddock and Swordfish – were comparatively lower, and the figures were more stable. Specifically, the number of Haddock was above 50,000 fish, which experienced a negligible drop. Swordfish numbers, similarly, remained unchanged at a marginal few thousand fish till the end of the period.

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The essay is well-structured with clear progression and logical organization. The use of cohesive devices is effective and appropriate.

Suggestions
  • Ensure a consistent narrative flow by maintaining the same order of species throughout the essay.

The lexical resource is varied and used appropriately. There is a good range of vocabulary related to the topic.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.

The essay addresses all parts of the task and provides a clear overview of the main trends and comparisons.

Suggestions
  • Ensure all relevant data is accurately represented.
  • Consider providing more detailed analysis of specific trends.