The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the quantity of households in the US with per year earnings in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall, households with the biggest income showed an upward trend over the three years , while those with an average income remained steady and others had some fluctuations in number of families.
Households earning $100,000 or more composed 30 million that was the highest figure and it increased throughout the period climbing to around 35 million households in 2015. Families that earn from less than $25,000 to $49,999 showed approximately the same trend around 25 millions in 2007 and increased to 30 million in 2011 that then stayed steady in 2015 .
Families with $50,000-$74,999 incomes stayed constant in three years composing 20 million families. Conversely households with $75,000-$99,999 salary constituted growing figure from around 14 million to 15 million families.
The essay presents a logical sequence of information, but there are some issues with clarity and flow.
Suggestions
- Use clearer transitions between points.
- Ensure consistent use of terms.
- Avoid abrupt shifts in focus.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are errors in sentence construction.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and misses some key comparisons.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed comparisons between income groups.
- Include more specific data points to support statements.
- Ensure all main features are covered.