The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given chart displays the ratio of a drug business total revenue, by countinent between the years 2002 to 2006. The data are expressed in percentage.
in an ovarall trend .america seen to have a highest ratio in the initial year and stealiy follow descending trend throught the years. eruope seem to follow a uniform trend . where as asia is follow the ascending oder between 2002 to 2006 year.
in the trem of america in the year 2002 drug business incresed by 41 percentage and stealiy goes downward till the years 2006.it seem that business have decline there profit.europe company mark over a sale of drug seem to have a ups and downs in there profits.
on ,the other hand asia company rise up and have a increasing profit ratio throught the years. it begin from 25 % and grown there profit to 40 % in the year 2006.
The essay lacks clear organization and logical progression of ideas.
Suggestions
- Organize the data logically by discussing each region separately.
- Use linking words to connect ideas and paragraphs.
- Summarize the main trends clearly.
The vocabulary is limited and contains spelling errors.
The essay contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks complex sentence structures.
The essay attempts to address the task but lacks clarity and completeness.
Suggestions
- Provide a clear introduction and summary.
- Ensure accurate data representation.
- Make relevant comparisons between regions.