The chart below shows the percentage of adult of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparions where relevant.
The given chart illustrates data about the proportion of adults of various age groups in the UK who used the Internet on a daily basis between 2003 and 2006.
Overall, the chart clearly shows that internet usage was by far the most popular among 25-44 year olds, whereas the reverse was true for those aged 65 and over during the period in question.
Looking at the details, as regards 16-24 age categories, the internet consumption remained flat at 80 in two years from 2003 to 2004. After that, the figures went up remarkably to 100 in 2005, but the percentage decreased to approximately 90 in 2006. For the 65+ age bracket, the percentage was roughly 18% and did not change during the two-year period from 2004 to 2005. In 2006, however, there was a slight increase in daily internet usage, which rose to 20%.Interestingly, the oldest age group did not use the internet in 2003.
By contrast, the figures for 25-44 year olds were significant, starting with just 50 in 2003, hitted to 80 in four year period.For the 45-54 age group, usage did not decline and grew from 60% to 80%. Despite fluctuations from 2003 to 2005, internet usage among the 55-64 age categories, increased and reached 50% in 2006.
The essay presents information in a logical order, but there are some abrupt transitions.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
- Avoid abrupt transitions between ideas.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary, though some word choices are awkward.
The essay shows some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.
The essay addresses the task, summarizing key features and making relevant comparisons.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data points for clarity.
- Ensure all main features are highlighted.