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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003-2006

The given chart illustrates the proportion of adults who belongs to various age categories in the UK, daily consumption between 2003 and 2006.
Overall, growing up was seen off among all age brackets. While the top percentages belonged to people who are 25-44 year olds, 65+ year olds had a little change. The biggest users were 16-24 year olds as well as the least internet usage was observed among 65+ years old people.
During 2003 and 2004, young adolescents stayed steadily in using internet in 80 percentages. However, the daily internet usage among them rised to 100 percentages sharply in 2005. But during 2006, a little decrease was observed. Among 65+, unconsiderable change was seen off in 2005 compared to 2004, while there was no information of internet consumption in 2003.
People around 25 years old and middle ages elevated permanently from 50-60 to 80 percentages year by year without descents. The percentage of using internet among 55-64 year olds fluctuated between 2003 and 2005. In 2006, it grew to 50 gradually.
In conclusion, although many fluctuantions were observed, any declines were not seen off, almost. The internet consumption grew year by year among both youngs and middle ages.

5.0

The essay presents a general overview of the data but lacks clear organization and logical flow.

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  • Use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph.
  • Ensure logical progression in describing data trends.
  • Avoid abrupt transitions between ideas.

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some inaccuracies.

The essay contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and accurate interpretation of data.

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  • Provide more detailed comparisons between age groups.
  • Ensure accurate representation of data trends.
  • Include more specific data points to support statements.