The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010
The bar charts illustrates statistics concerning percentage of respondents who participate in three surveys on do not going to work in a country of Europe in the years 2000, 2005, and 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the charts are that illness was the most common purpose for absenteeism in all of the period while stress was the least faced reason for do not going in the workplace.
Looking at the details, in 2005, illness was the first common reason for do not going to work accounted for 45%. The second reason was family responsibilities and the proportion of this figure was about 30%. The next reasons were personal needs, unexpected problems, and stress, accounted for 15%, 10% and just over 5% respectively.
In 2005, illness was 40% and placed as the first. Family responsibilities place stayed unchangeable in 2005 and made up around 23%. Other figures showed 22%, 17%, and 5% respectively.
In 2010,
The essay lacks a clear structure and logical progression of ideas. Some information is repeated, and there is an abrupt end.
Suggestions
- Organize the essay into clear paragraphs for each year.
- Ensure a logical flow of information.
- Conclude the essay effectively.
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. Some phrases are awkwardly constructed.
Frequent grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures affect clarity.
The task is incomplete as the essay abruptly ends without covering all the data.
Suggestions
- Complete the analysis for the year 2010.
- Ensure all relevant data is discussed.
- Provide a summary or conclusion.