The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.
The bar chsrt gives infromation about how much waste was collected by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.Overall, it is clear that there was an upward trend the amount of waste paper which was the highest figure for all observed years.While the opposite was true for garden waste during the period.
In 2012, the amount of waste paper started at 57 tons and this was followed by a considerably decrease to 40 tons in the next two years a figure than that rose to 70 tons in 2015.The figure for glass declined slightly in 2014 but then rose to 52 in 2011.Meanwhile the amount of collected waste tins lowest point of approximately 27 tons in 2012 before rising to over 39 tons.The figure for garden.Despite falling significantly from 32 to 25 in 2012,the waste of garden increase dramatically to 35 tons in 2015.
The essay lacks clear organization and logical flow. Some sentences are difficult to follow due to missing conjunctions and punctuation errors.
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The vocabulary is basic and repetitive, with some spelling errors.
The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and missing articles.
The essay attempts to describe the data but lacks accuracy and completeness in some areas.
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- Ensure all data points are accurately represented.
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