The chart below shows what Anthropologist gradutes from one university did after finishing their uindergraduate degree couse. The table shows the salaries of Anthropologists in work after 5 years.
The charts illustrate data about the destinations of Anthropology graduates after their university and salaries of five-year experienced Anthropologists. Overall, graduates hired as full-time employees rank first with over half of the graduates, while other graduates – part-time, full time postgraduate, unemployed – are together host to less than half of the total. As for the table, while the highest salary is given to the Anthropologists by governmental sector, the salaries of private companies and freelancers show the highest amount between 50,000$ and 99,999$.
Regarding the pie chart, there is a significant disparity between the proportions of full-time and part-time workers, 52% and 15% respectively. The share of part-time work postgraduate students is a little less than twice as low as that of unemployed, with the latter standing at 12%. The percentages of full-time postgraduate students and the unknown are identical, with 8%.
With respect to the government sector and freelance consultants on the table, they both pay more than 75,000$ or over 100,000$ for the 80% of Anthropologists with 5-year work experience. Likewise, the proportion of the employees who are making 25,000$-49,999$ and 50,000-74,999$ in both companies are equal with respective contributions of 5% and 15%. As for the private companies, the least amount of salary is earned by one tenth percent of the employees, whereas the highest amount is made by 30%. Those who are making 50,000-74,999$ and 75,000-99,999$ together make up more than half, 35% and 25% respectively.
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