The chartbelow
The chart below gives information about the entor number of minutes (in billions) of phone calls in the Uk, Separated into three groups between 1995 and 2002. Overall, the number of local telephone calls expierenced a signar picant decline, however, the number of national and international and mobiles (all calls) went up.
In 1995, the number of local telephone calls showed to 72 billions. In 1996 and 1997.
the figure increased from 78 to 32 billion phone calls. Despite in 1993 and 1999 the figures peaked at top, those were 85 billions between 2000 and 2002, the figures decre sed from 79 to 68 billions and in 2001, wal 75 billions
In 1995 and 1999, the number of nationel and international phone calls increased from 35 to 40 billion calls, also, in 2000, the figure went up to 50 billions. In 2001 and 2002, the figures remained unchaged, that were 55 billion calls
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