The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.
The pie chart illustrates the distribution of dance class locations for young people in a town in Australia, while the bar chart shows the types of dance classes attended by two age groups: under 11 and 11–16.
Overall, private studios are the most common location for dance classes, and modern dance is the most popular style among both age groups. Meanwhile, tap and ballet classes show differing trends between the two groups.
To begin with, nearly half of all dance classes (48%) are conducted in private studios, making it the most frequent location. School halls account for 24%, followed by community halls and other venues at 18%, while college-based studios make up the smallest proportion at 10%.
In terms of dance styles, modern dance is the most preferred type for both age groups. The number of 11–16-year-olds taking modern dance classes is close to 700, while for the under-11 group, this figure stands at about 400. Tap dance is more popular among younger students (approximately 450) than among the older group (350). Ballet, however, has the smallest participation overall, with fewer than 200 students in both age categories.
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